I feel this is a good start, but needs to take on a few aspect alterations; the Photon Torpedo is misaligned with the ship's angle and direction of flight. Honestly, based on shadow and direction of flight, the Photon Torpedo should be on the right side of the phaser fire. As it sits currently, the Photon Torpedo appears to above and behind the ship's hull despite the light flare in front of the bow. The directional angle you have the torpedo going is following the phaser fire, and the torpedoes aren't capable of adjusting to angle as the phaser can whilst the ship turns (as the angle of the ship to the viewer have indicated)
Alright, you have no room for suggestive criticism. Noted. Sorry you were offended. But truthfully, no one is perfect, and you can't improve upon yourself or your works if you aren't willing to take suggestions.